Archive for April, 2014

Are they really sure about this excellence thing?

April 8, 2014

K&L Gates ad1This ad copy for a supporter of the Sydney Writers’ Festival provokes some thought. Aside from thought-provoking requiring a hyphen, the first sentence contains what is known as a faulty parallelism. How can “K&L Gates understands” follow on logically from “Like writing”?  Some editing and re-writing is very much needed here. Is there a writer in the house?